Build a Better Trap

Build a Better Trap

A Poem by Desert Knave

I think I need to build
A better mouth-trap
So I can capture
A lot more of my crap
Before it leaves my yap

© 2023 Desert Knave


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If you manage to find a method that captures one's fleeting thoughts, which are often more hasty than even the fastest of bunnies, please let me know. I also need to get my hands on something better than a dream-catcher to encapsulate the inspirations I got from my dreams and fleeting moments of the day. Oh! Thinking of all the work I could've made if I had discovered my talent much sooner, or if I wasn't so much of a birdbrain!.. Certainly does tick me off quite a bit.
An entertaining and relatable read, author Desert Knave. Perhaps even a bit ... too relatable.

Posted 5 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Desert Knave

5 Months Ago

Thank you. Lately I find my mouth is much less filtered than it should be ... especially around fami.. read more



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If you manage to find a method that captures one's fleeting thoughts, which are often more hasty than even the fastest of bunnies, please let me know. I also need to get my hands on something better than a dream-catcher to encapsulate the inspirations I got from my dreams and fleeting moments of the day. Oh! Thinking of all the work I could've made if I had discovered my talent much sooner, or if I wasn't so much of a birdbrain!.. Certainly does tick me off quite a bit.
An entertaining and relatable read, author Desert Knave. Perhaps even a bit ... too relatable.

Posted 5 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Desert Knave

5 Months Ago

Thank you. Lately I find my mouth is much less filtered than it should be ... especially around fami.. read more

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Desert Knave
Desert Knave

Phoenix, AZ



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I am in my mid-60's, a manic-depressive, seldom impressive, often recessive poet who loves the ocean, rain, the desert, and playing with rhyme. I am a native Arizonan, a Virgo, and a hair metal fan an.. more..

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