Emerging Ripples

Emerging Ripples

A Poem by Desert Dreamer
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photo inspired....

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Ripples in a pond

tree spirit swirling

reflecting my thoughts

I emerge from the current

and face myself, wondering.

© 2011 Desert Dreamer


Author's Note

Desert Dreamer
Attached image is a drawing I made today.



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This is very interesting. It to me a while, because a lot is said in such a short piece. Ripples reflecting my thoughts. I'm guessing the thoughts are rippling in your mind and mirror the uncertainty of self. Refreshingly, short, compact and worthwhile. Love the imagery by the way

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Sensational...love the image...great wisdom in this piece. Much enjoy this...excellent writing..oh and creative too...

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Lovely wisdom with inspiring hues...looks like it was fun!

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Even Better!
What's cool is that the colors compliment the Tree Spirit, very calm, green and shadow, swaying and rustling in the afternoon breeze.



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like reeling me in to your magic, wondering

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Love the drawing... a powerful message within this short piece... we must confront our fears to understand our strengths.

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Outstanding.
I know this place. I am always wondering.
Usually, in those moments when the tree holds one in trance, the following moments make me feel like at best a visitor, at worst, a pest.
I guess I will have to try this finger painting thing.
Well, next time I rent a room with just the right wall......

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The imagery in this short piece is spectacular. Last line is a very deep thought and beautiful.

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beautiful words and image

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oh, beautiful sister, you are a delight

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A neat reflective poem... I too like to observe a moment of nature and wonder ... There is something profound about your words, simply and neatly threaded together...

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Added on February 7, 2011
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Tags: reflection, poetry, tree, water

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Desert Dreamer
Desert Dreamer

Sonoran Desert, AZ



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