Lovely writing... bittersweet feelings of both longing and hesitation... it's a hard call to know when to love, so we run despite the pull on our hearts. Beautiful writing...
what greater than die in between the arms of the ones we seek ... sometimes we look for someone to love, instead of loving the ones we have around, thinking, no, wishing that out there someone is waiting for us .
amazing piece, hope some day you'll meet him and exhale the first sigh.
"No page so sure that it never turns." is a lyric I think of that comes to mind here... life is always by the book, you must know when to put it down and write a short story... very creative and profound work.
This story was sad and really plays with the readers emotions.
The sentiments were very moving, but for some reason I just
didnt feel convinced by the words. Something seemed to say
that sometimes people can want or may even need to be chased.
I felt the presence of a supernatural hardened shell, but a very
gentle spirit on the inside. It seemed like superhuman bravery, but
also superhuman fear lurking in its shadow in the background.
You triggered many haunting images in my mind. You did an amazing
job of showing us all what it feels like to be at the crossroads of
trust and uncertainty.
Hello :)
My name is Desiree.
What brings me to this website is my love for poetry and storytelling. At this time I consider myself more of a poet, than a writer or author.
I do not have the pa.. more..