I'll love you when...

 

 

 

 

 

I'll love you
as the wind blows
you far away from me

And as your eyes
look wearily
At graceful,
waving seas

I'll love you
as the branches sway
and dance along the shore
Then when you sigh
and let me go
I'll lay down
forever more

 

 

 

 

Reviews

[Cynthia]

That's a beautiful poem!!
The picture in my head in really nice after reading!

[Glarthir]

The imagery is just fantastic. Basically l33t to epic proportions. Hahahaha

[Forever Mine]

Wow... this is so beautiful. I can just picture this. very lovely

[Jonathan De Elvira]

Awwwwww...This was so sweet...
but there's bitter taste too...
Hurm, but love does tend to become short lived this days....

[.quan.011.]

Wow, I think this is your peom yet