I felt the warmth of your smile

 

 

We laughed the night away

and

You made love to me beneath

a star scattered sky

 

I'll never let this go

even though

Summer faded into Autumn

with those

warm, eastern winds

 

Your face was reflected

against the water

rippling with our voices

 

I sighed and took your hand

Loving the feel of skin against skin

fingertips dancing

to the rhythm of our foot steps

 

Lets watch the seasons change

and I'll hold your image in my grasp

Empty pockets won't hold back

our happiness

 

Reviews

[M.Kilani]

breath-taking !! I'm really out of words !!
I love it !!

[Amber Betty Marie Child..]

a long love experience caught all up to one moment. amazing feeling mizz desiree

[skye]

i wish i could experience this...reading this mad me tear up at the thought of me in this situation with someone i love

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

Wow what a combination of sexy and tender... love and lust make for the greatest relationships.

I love this part...

I'll never let this go
even though
Summer faded into Autumn
with those
warm, eastern winds

because life changes but love never does.

[Bard Constantine]

This is lovely image capturing, a poetic photo shoot, if you willl... tenderly expressed moments that capture the feel of newborn love... I enjoyed that you avoided the cliche of feelings changing with the seasons, but here the emotions remain despite the changes. Beautiful work...

[Michael X]

you have rendered the poetic image of lost to innocence and romance,
and carefree love where reflections are made against sparkles,
where autumn fades into the eastern sky and stars hover the distance
between thought and dreaming, and laughs were the effects of
happiness in knowing nothing matters but the look in a lover's eyes,
you have such a phenomonal way of hynotizing your readers.
across the board 100

[Jenny-Jen-Jen]

I love this. It's breathtaking and beautiful. You are very talented and the imagery in this poem is wonderful.

Great write! Looking forward to reading more from you.

--Jen

[Robin]

loving that closing thought in this love poem that speaks truly from the heart