Oceans Greeting

Oceans Greeting

 

You’re so endless

Why do I feel limited?

 

I gaze towards you

Take you into my body

 

You free my mind

My thoughts disappear

 

Even with the clouds

Looming threateningly over you

You’ve never looked

More at peace

 

If I could take you with me

Take you home with me

I wouldn’t travel far

For this fresh escape

 

I never seem to tire of you

I don’t want to leave without you

I need you

My yearly escape

 

Reality is so far from here

Be my new reality

 

Home never seems homey

Without the breeze

Hair tugging

Soothing sound

Of your eager

Content

Waves 

Author's Note

Originally written on paper without stanzas, I typed it up and decided to make the poem clearer by adding stanzas.

Reviews

[Ufi Auttorri ~ UfoAutho..]

Very nice!

[That_Guy]

I'm glad I live in Southern California.

Beautiful poem, the imagery was great. I saw everything as I read your poem. great job

[Alex Hunter]

Beautiful, well written and very psychedelic, I like it :D

[afra]

beautiful poem ...i love it ...well done

[kublakhan27]

You certainly seem happier in August than any other month of the year...you always write vividly but this one really takes the reader's mind and plants it into this piece of Utopian reflection...wow...that's a long review by my standards haha...nice work, Kels :)

[Destinyxi]

Many words coming from my mr.smarty huh? Haha, I'm flattered babe :P

I had a feeling yours was the next review I'd get when I saw the 1 new review notification :)

[kublakhan27]

LOL Have I become that predictable? Or is my larger-than-life presence so potent that you just know it's me ;) haha I'm joking of course...very few people are smaller than life than I am, literally and figuratively :P Keep the great poems coming my dear :)

[Destinyxi]

Oh my lord ima smack you. Thinking negatively tsk tsk. You're not predictable, I just know you very well haha :P

[kublakhan27]

Haha yes you do indeed know me well...but I am getting better, am I not? I'm not near as negative as I have been in the past, at least I don't think I am...if I am, well, I'll have to sit back and take your smacking I guess :P

[That_Girl]

Oh how I miss the warm beaches of Southern California... I'm sure Florida is gorgeous as well. It truly is an escape.. you described it all perfectly! Well done!

[Destinyxi]

I'd love to see California though x.x sounds lovely. There's absolutely nothing like the ocean. Thanks for your review!

[That_Girl]

Oh it is!

[Crazy Cat Man]

:) I absolutely love this :) u captured the feeling of tranquility of the beach. ur lucky to stay there for long. i was there for one day and felt the peace. I love going to the stores around the shops. the breeze, even going far away to more shops. just the peace of walking around and not worrying about the big city life or trying to impress everyone.

Home never seems homey

Without the breeze
Hair tugging
Soothing sound
Of your eager
Content
Waves

perfect ending

[Destinyxi]

Did I? I'm glad you liked the ending, I was itching to change it. Thanks for your review!

[Crazy Cat Man]

no leave it alone :) its good

[Eloha]

I like your girlish voice in this and the Sea does seem quite mystical. I remember going there to cleanse my spirit, back when I lived near the coast of the Bay of Bengal.

I enjoyed reading this!

[Destinyxi]

How was my voice girlish in this poem? Haha. thank you for the review!