Heaven

Wrote this whenever, pic from http://pingmag.jp/2006/05/18/5-steps-to-css-heaven/

Life is everything you may say

So much to give and so much to take

Whether you ask the question day to day

What if when we die we awake?

What do we do with life?

With all our hate and all our joy

Do we cut it short with a knife?

Or run around it like a child with a toy

What if life is short and then you’re gone

So little but so much at stake

So many pros and so many cons

What if when we die we awake?

Society they control us

With their rules and lies

We need a break we all cuss

And finally look someone in the eyes

A simple glance is all too little

A long gaze is what you should take

Don’t play others like a fiddle

What if when we die we awake?

A friend, a companion, or even a child

Should be at your side through it all

Don’t make your relationship at all mild

Because they’ll be there when you fall

Now I’m starting to doubt

All the things I thought were fake

I might even start to pout

And realize when we die we really do awake

A place in the sky

Call it a Cloud 7

Don’t try to pass it by

This place is called Heaven

Author's Note

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Reviews

[cimmy wuv xxxooo]

I loved this piece, it flows perfectly and comes together nicley.
It has allot of meaning to it, and its very deep, its written from your heart.
I can also feel the meaning to each word and in each line.
You really put some deep thought into this one.
Great write :)

[Lola]

As if you've read the idea off my mind.
The idea that somehow when we die that is when we truly awaken and live.
I believe in the exact same message, and you have put it so beautifully and profoundly, better than I ever could.
Great work!

[DevonWayne]

thank you for such a great review

[Talesha]

I really like this poem and its message.Thank you for sharing.

[DevonWayne]

Thank you for the motivation.

[Shaquana Adams]

This reminds me of The Matrix. I like the concept very much. Not many poets can depict this the way you did. Thanks for sharing this! Keep writing :)

[DevonWayne]

I didn't even think about that, but now the matrix and this poem makes so much sense. And thanks.