Heaven

One day i will see such an amazing place,

a world of light, no sin, no hurt, just joy.

Jesus will be there, at the right hand of God.

I imagine an awesome glimmering gold masterpiece upon which the King of Kings will sit.

Constant blue skies, not an earth blue, but a perfect, gorgeous, capturing blue.

So beautiful that it draws you in, making it impossible not to day dream.

Grass that is soft and plush, calling out for one to lay in it as you gaze at the skies.

a grass that does not itch but leaves a tingling sensation of warm coziness creeping through out your body. water that is pure and sweet, yet quenching any thirst possible,

a water that rejuvenates one's body for free innocent pleasurable play.

Oh and food, abundant food, so scrumptious that one could not stop enjoying its delights,

even when not partaking of its fulfillment.

then the animals, amazingly friendly. animals that play and joke with us,

filling us with much humorous laughter.

a laughter that fills the fields and makes the trees and grass dance and laugh as well.

Great company, every one knows and treats every one else as they would themselves

. yet the best part has only briefly been mentioned.

the Lord Jesus Christ.

such a powerful majestic sight one can hardly look at Him for more than a moment.

though he graciously sups and walks with each of us,

speaking with such a powerful, yet invitingly friendly voice

that fills any and every person with a joy, peace, and awe that cannot be explained.

a Person with so much power, who is so personable and reaches out to all to befriend them.

this is how i imagine the world called heaven as being,

though this is only my imagination

one could not fathom all the wonders of heaven,

until we receive our new glorious bodies that is!

Reviews

[Jenny Nelson]

Sounds like a great place to be! A very uplifting writing. The one thing I might suggest is that maybe you could write your poetry in more of "poetry format," (more vertical) rather than in a paragraph form. I find it a little easier to get the feel of poem when it isn't written in paragraph form. Nice description.

[Whitney]

I agree with the previous reviewer, the format would be more formal and easier to read. Segments are great for individualizing your ideals.

But again, I agree, it's a wonderful poem, it just puts a smile on my face to read. And it truly does sound like a joyous place.

Keep it up girl!