Fate

Sometimes i feel so depressed inside

ant the thing is, i dont know why

it's not that i dont like living

but i ponder what it would be like to die

i find myself imagining how it will take place

will i simply pass peacefully

or shall i die in horror?

How many people will morn for me

or shall i pass lonely?

will i be consumed by fire,

shot and called a liar?

maybe ill drown?

just maybe ill go in my sleep

still i cant help but think

my fate will be lonely and painful

isnt this all the world has become

loneliness, isolation, abandonment, and hurt?

what happened to single family homes?

to peace with neighbors

and trust based on a single word

it depresses me to see whats happening

every day i see wickedness all around

thus i ponder how i will go down

Reviews

[Jenny Nelson]

Can't say as I've ever gone quite as in depth thinking about my own demise, but you did a good job on covering the bases. Can certainly feel the sadness and frustration in this piece. You make a good point on how all the "mess" around us can affect us individually. Nice job with this.

[Whitney]

This is a fabulous piece. I love it. All the thoughts that could cross one's mind about their own death, are here, and I can almost hear someone speaking.

Great job! Keep it up!