For who I am

Here we sit, Here we lay

Inspecting this life, a world of unknown

All that there is too offer, all that you offer me

Love, life, eternity

Our flaws are known

My claws I've shown

In your arm, I am at home

together, intertwined

No longer in the crossing

I shall not step away

Take me to your paradise

my love, my dear

Take for who I am

Your heart forever shining

Your touch forever loving

So here we sit, what do you have to say

I give you my eternity

Oh, take me to your paradise

My love, my dear

I except you for who you are

I will not lie

Complicated is my game

My flaws you have felted

My mind may wonder

but fear not I shall never stray

So take me to your paradise 

My love, my dear

Take me for who I am

Broken and never shall I repair

Author's Note

More then likely in need of editing and I feel as if something is missing. I will update when I put my finger on it. Open to any suggestions and thoughts. =)

Reviews

[~Sara~]

That's a beautiful poem. I like how you based it on having people like you for who you are. Sometimes in life you just have to say, "Take me for who I am, or watch me as I go." Great job, thanks for sharing this poem, :)
-Sara

[Boy of the red]

Nicely written and great use of medifor I really enjoyed it

[Btwixer]

I really love this piece, so nicely expressed