Tourists in tin cans

Tourists in tin cans

A Poem by Dianah
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Another short one about Summer in The Lake District

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Rising like the morning mist
Watching ants stuck in the jam
Clogging up her arteries
All the tourists in tin cans.

D.Hinson
 

© 2009 Dianah


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Almost certainly, the tin cans in this poem, are a metaphor for the cars of tourists! As a cyclist, I suspect that the writer is no friend of the car? Particularly, if faced by the terrible congestion etc, which is probably being brought to her area of England - by this seemingly unstoppable army!

Well, the title reminded me a little of Andy Warhol's famous artistic exhibit (which also featured tin cans). In style, this is slightly similar to a few of Tzedequiel's poems (on this site). I wondered, if this form of poetry falls into a specific category? Either way, it is surrealistic in the main, and I remain a true fan! Thankyou, for sharing this with us!

Posted 14 Years Ago


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Almost certainly, the tin cans in this poem, are a metaphor for the cars of tourists! As a cyclist, I suspect that the writer is no friend of the car? Particularly, if faced by the terrible congestion etc, which is probably being brought to her area of England - by this seemingly unstoppable army!

Well, the title reminded me a little of Andy Warhol's famous artistic exhibit (which also featured tin cans). In style, this is slightly similar to a few of Tzedequiel's poems (on this site). I wondered, if this form of poetry falls into a specific category? Either way, it is surrealistic in the main, and I remain a true fan! Thankyou, for sharing this with us!

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Dianah

Lancaster, United Kingdom



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