Teenagers

Teenagers

A Story by Miss Evans
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A six word story for a contest hosted by the wonderful "Ami N.".

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Teenagers: Love to hate 2 love.

© 2012 Miss Evans


Author's Note

Miss Evans
I thought I'd wait until I saw a efw reviews to put up my note on what the whole point of the poem is.

This is not about loving people, or having crushes. The 2 was symbolic for saying hate twice, since we cannot use more than six words. It also has the meaning of teens txt-speak.

It would be read "Love to hate, hate to love".

This is more the general attitude of teens, always pointing out the bad and griping on the negative- Never appreciating people or things for what they are.

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I love this :)

Posted 12 Years Ago


I like the way you did it, now that I understand it. However, before that I wouldn't of understood it. But, now that I doo, I quite like it. I see the way that you did it, to say more than it would normally read.

Posted 12 Years Ago


Torrential Puberty!
Being a Teen is just... plain tough !!


Posted 12 Years Ago


Haha, you'd be surprised with what you can make with 6 words. Love the "2". It really captures the teenagers today, as Allen already stated.
Optime, amicae! :D

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Posted 12 Years Ago


Oh wow! That was good!

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Posted 12 Years Ago


Haha, I like this one. :) Nice job! Definitely captures your ordinary teenagers and often the stupidity that comes with 'liking' and 'having crushes' and 'boyfriend, girlfriend' situations. ;D

Well done.

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Posted 12 Years Ago


CLEVER.

I smiled when I saw that " two ".
Am I the only one who strayed away from the general topic of love?
I feel like a newb.

Lovely!
I'm refraining on rating on these things though.. :S I don't think it'd be fair.

This review was written for a previous version of this writing

Posted 12 Years Ago



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Added on January 31, 2012
Last Updated on February 3, 2012
Tags: Experimental, Shortest Story Ever, Creative
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