My Former Child

An old piece, but I like this one

        The yellowing photograph of you
The torment that you put me through
Aching heart that beats so loud
The corpse of Romance in the ground
The dagger twists and leaves a mark
Incinerates with single spark
The callous glee with which you smiled
Returned me to my former child

Reviews

[J.P.O.et]

Whoah,
'The callous glee with which you smiled
Returned me to my former child'
Seriously introspective stuff here, this is short but rife with longing
Nice read, Draven
J.P.O.et

[Amanda Crandall]

The corpse of Romance in the ground

This line is definitely worth it, very clever and thought provoking.

[Lady Of Darkness]

It may be an old piece, but it is a great piece non the less.
Short and simple plus straight to the point.
Our former child dissapear's as we grow older, but we still act like our inner child.