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About Me

I am 30 years old from the Ocean State
Seeking to learn and share and have constructive,
creative discourse with others who have opinions
and ideas. I believe in a theory of evolution which
is centered on our brains. As we all know, we only use a small
percentage of our brains, which is a direct precursor to
evolution. You really think if there are parts of our brains
we don't even know the capabilities of, that we aren't going to
find out. If we don't kill ourselves first, there will be an
AWAKENING
Hope to see you there
There is a quote from Einstein, along the lines of
'It is clear man's technology will far surpass his humanity,
yet the true test will be for man's humanity to then
surpass his technology'
Are we there yet?


'Sorry boys, all the stitches in the world couldn't sew me back together again. Lay down, lay down. Gonna stretch me out in Fernandez Funeral Home on 109th Street. Always knew I'd make a stop there, just a lot later than a whole gang of people thought. Last of the Mo-ricans, well maybe not the last. Gail's gonna be a good momma, new improved Carlito Brigante. Hope she uses the money to get out. Not enough room in this city for big hearts like hers. Sorry baby. I tried the best I could. Honest. Can't come with me on this trip though. Gettin the shakes now. Last call for drinks. Bar's closin. Sun's out. Where we goin for breakfast? Don't wanna go far. Rough night. Tired baby, tired..............'

Carlito Brigante played by Al Pacino in 'Carlito's Way'

'Summer Ends Too Soon' by Lorna Dee Cervantes

Summer Ends Too Soon

Was the last she said. Beautiful
Maria, Ave Maria. Maria dodging
father's fists-and his. Maria praying
under the table. Maria crooning pain
songs in the bathroom. Maria combing
his sludge out of her hair. Maria
serving masters. Seventeen year
old Maria. Maria, your Lady
of the Kept Secret. Maria dancing
to his temper. Maria washing
her panties in the toilet. Two
days after graduation, Maria
swaying from the limb. Maria,
sweet purple fruit of his sin.
Ave Maria.


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Posted 10 Years Ago


I always appreciate your input, so I sent you a read request on something that I'm excited about, a novel about humans invading earth, considering that we were the aliens that altered this planet. It's an idea that I really want to run with and make into something.

What do you think?


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Posted 10 Years Ago


Thank you for reviewing my newest piece. It means something that you give your feedback, and I feel that your words are sincere, your mind reliable.

You did catch throughout "Dot the 'I's" the hope in it, as in the lines that say how I've found a joy in something other than substance. That's really the real message, and I think I'll edit that later to help that meaning to really be apparent through the end. Thank you again, don't hesitate to send me read requests as I'd love to give yousome feedback.

--Vanessa

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Posted 10 Years Ago


Hello friend, thank you so much for your cortious comments.
How've you been?

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Posted 10 Years Ago


Yeah.

You're good.


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Posted 10 Years Ago


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Last Login: Feb 2, 2009

I loved how the years looked! So awesome how it seemed to follow in order.

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Posted 10 Years Ago


Thank you... so much. For your comment. That is so kind. And don't worry about me - I'll write another wordpress blog to make you feel better!! K?? :) :)

I wish I could keep posting Pace, as well - I loved that you were reading it, and enjoying it! The next step, if I don't get a good response from teh publishers (And the way the market is right now, they probably can't take a chance on a new writer) then I'm just going to go ahead and self-publish it :) I really want to see it... all together, tangible and real, and wonderful :) and i'm honored you could be a part of that process. :)

Hugs!!!
Kara

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Posted 10 Years Ago


Haha, yes that's Katie, my good friend, who I speak to about most ideas that would be otherwise labeled 'insane.'

I'll be waiting for your request, and will surely give you all and any input I've to offer.


Trying not to be subject of police searches,
Vanessa ;)

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Posted 10 Years Ago


Thanks so much for reading 'The Man', as well as checking up on me. I always look forward to your reviews or your input. Hope I didn't waste my time on that, one, because I don't know if it came out the way that I wanted it to. Hopefully the message got through to some people. Maybe it's the young in me that brought out that poem, my way of disregarding the fatality that the government or any system puts on me. I'd hoped I wasn't the only one to notcie that without having choices, there just isn't room for doing what you want, what you beleive. Maybe, as I said, I'm trying to excuse myself partly for some of the things I've been doing, haha.. I don't know if laws would be my friend presently.

Movie sounded interesting.... I'll have to check it out.
Once more, I thank you for so kindly putting your words to my own. I love your analysis.
Send requests any time.

Your friend,
Vanessa

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Posted 10 Years Ago


My gosh - you can't even understand how grateful I am to you for taking the time to read my chapters.

This has been in the making for so long, and shared with SO few people... the fact that you're reading (and, it seems, enjoying!) means the world to me. Especially as it is a very specific genre, that no everyone likes.

Thank yoU!!!!!!!!!!!

Kara

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Posted 10 Years Ago


than you darling, for your wonderful review... that piece does mean a lot to me, and i love what you pulled from it. the image of 'clawing the earth' hit me especially hard when i wrote it.

big hugs . and happy new year

<3kara