Ouch

Ouch

A Poem by Annabelle Lee

Been doing this for nearly three years straight
But I had a f**k up so bad today
I was getting after it just like every time before, 
But I'm not so careful any more
An upward stroke, must have been too rough
It hurt so bad, Annabelle be tough
I'm pretty raw, there's no more skin
Because I cut myself while I was shaving my shin

© 2013 Annabelle Lee


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watch out where you direct that razor, we only come equipped with so many layers of skin! and when you find yourself wearing thin you must rely on those you love to pull you thru! i enjoyed this vibrant little jaunt through the harder sides of reality, trust me, you will come out unscathed! nice write!

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Annabelle Lee

11 Years Ago

thanks, quin!



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Hahaha, love it

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Annabelle Lee

11 Years Ago

thank you
This is so funny. I use the cream. It stinks to high heaven, but it never makes me weep.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Annabelle Lee

11 Years Ago

this was actually one of the few times i had used the cream
KAOlmsted

11 Years Ago

I meant Nair xD I should have just wrote Nair *laugh* Shameless plug for Nair? Let me say Nair on.. read more
i cut myself everytime i shave. lol

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Annabelle Lee

11 Years Ago

thats terrible.
Be myself!

11 Years Ago

Yep. horrible circulation=shaky hands
This works both literally and metaphorically.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Annabelle Lee

11 Years Ago

thank yoi
I can barely shave my face let alone anything else.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Annabelle Lee

11 Years Ago

shving was invented as a way of torturing the civilize...... and humorous for the unkempt.
To begin this could be more information than I need but on reflection better to cut your shin or in my case chin than anywhere in betwin!

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Annabelle Lee

11 Years Ago

righteo
Ouch! See that's why I rarely do that :) you should try the natural lifestyle, not as socially acceptable, but way less nicks and cuts :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Annabelle Lee

11 Years Ago

bive tried but then it starts itching.
The Nude Writer

11 Years Ago

Special shampoos and conditioners :) hehe
I have to admit I have done the same thing except when shaving my face.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Annabelle Lee

11 Years Ago

burns like a mofo
watch out where you direct that razor, we only come equipped with so many layers of skin! and when you find yourself wearing thin you must rely on those you love to pull you thru! i enjoyed this vibrant little jaunt through the harder sides of reality, trust me, you will come out unscathed! nice write!

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Annabelle Lee

11 Years Ago

thanks, quin!
I'm glad this turned out to be about shaving and not cutting. Try being more careful. Your shin will heal, I like how you take a nondescript topic and run with it, nice job Annabelle.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Annabelle Lee

11 Years Ago

i will be haha.

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