Cornrows on a white girl

Cornrows on a white girl

A Poem by Annabelle Lee
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Yeah, just me bein stupid :p

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Corn rows on a white girl
Who would have thought?
Not saying I'm tryna be thug
Not saying I'm not

I think they look cool
So dude, what's your beef
Cornrows on a white girl
It's pretty damn hot on me

Corn rows on a white girl
Say "Don't mess with me" 
Make me look all tough 
So you'll leave me be

Corn rows on a white girl
Say "I'm kinda insane"
Because of how tight they're braided
They're affecting my brain

Corn rows on a white girl
Say "I'll take you down"
Nothing to pull yourself up
When you're on the ground

Corn rows on a white girl
Don't mean a damn thing
It's just something new
For Annabelle Lee

© 2013 Annabelle Lee


Author's Note

Annabelle Lee
trying something new with my hair, they're not "real" cornrows since they only go about halfway back, but I got a few comments at weights so I figured I'd write about it

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interesting. I actually had some cornrows back in the day.......way back in the day.......before
worry, wind, chemo, heredity, the jerry curl, two failed love affairs, too much salt and sugar,
the Detroit tigers baseball cap, sleeping standing on my head, rubbed it (rotted it) out.

I like this poem, for no other reason, than the image it conjures and the discussion it fosters.
good write,
dana

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Annabelle Lee

10 Years Ago

thank you.



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Haha I liked this one. I can picture the "corn rows", and I am instantly reminded of that movie "Blue Crush", about the girl who was a surfer in Hawaii, because her "thuggish" little sister had those half way back corn rows. I saw this...be what you want to be and do what you want to do...if you want to have corn rows, rock them like they are never going out of style and they'll look fantastic on you!

Metaphorically, this touches on the idea of stereotypes, and how we should avoid them at all costs. Just because someone looks a certain way does not mean that it is a reflection of their inner self. Well done!

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Annabelle Lee

10 Years Ago

Thank you!!!
Are you a fan of Tom Segura? If not, FYI he's a comedian with a Live CD called "White Girls With Cornrows". I like the poem though Annabelle, a good reflection on silly stereotypes.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Annabelle Lee

10 Years Ago

I have no idea who Tom Segura is, I'll definitely check him out, thank you!
Astro

10 Years Ago

You're welcome, if you're interested check out the podcast he and his comedienne wife do called 'You.. read more

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Hello everyone I am Annabelle Lee. I am FINALLY, after June 12, the ripe old age of fifteen. I'm a poet. I want to write novels, as well, but those do not belong on this site in hopes that someday .. more..

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