Femininity

Femininity

A Poem by Dominique Lambright
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Feminine power

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Femininity

 

The power of women is underestimated

Yeah we cook and clean, men act like they can’t but claim that whatever we can do they can do better

But how many men can say they can have a baby?

Bare a child, I dare you

See how your body bounces back

The tribulations that bring challenge

Are nothing compared to a woman’s life

There’s a reason why God chose us to do it

Women are forced to think before they do

We make a mistake we pay with consequences

Men make a mistake; we say “he’s a guy”

Yes we choose what to do with our bodies

But we also deal with the involuntary happenings

Expectation and stereotypes hinder our abilities and opportunity

Are we really the ones who need to prove ourselves though?

We are expected to look good all the time

Be the ones sensitive to others emotions

Comfort the crying and feel for the angered and disappointed

We have a right to a day off with a compliment of how beautiful we look without the glitz

Where’s the sensitivity to our bearings and struggles?

When those things don’t happen

And there are complaints of how women are crazy

Yes we get upset and hurt by the un-appreciation

Without us though, men wouldn’t know what to do

We are the ones that bring out that other side you didn’t know existed

We humanize you

In past times it’s proven that women are the backbone, not men

And when this is realized, we will see plenty change

© 2013 Dominique Lambright


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Love your writing!! Very well put to the point. Women have to give a lot more and instead of recognition, they often get presumptuous comments. You speak exactly from my heart. I find it very important to address such topics and to draw more attention to the image of women. Nobody should be embarrassed to be a feminist. Unfortunately, this term is often very negatively coined by other men as well as by women.

Posted 3 Years Ago


Malcolmveli used a line which reminded me of an essay I wrote a couple of years ago. The line was: "I feel that the power of women has been kept down because of fear of just how powerful the woman is ."
For another man's view's of the general superiority of the distaff side, please check out the essay, "What Does Femininity Mean To You?", link appended below.
http://www.writerscafe.org/writing/mark090854/612164/

Posted 11 Years Ago


Dominique Lambright

11 Years Ago

Ok I will do that :)
First of all let me say I Love Women. You will see the masculine and feminine principles all around the Universe. The Universe is both Masculine and Feminine and when these principles come together they create. I feel that the power of women has been kept down because of fear of just how powerful the woman is . The woman's mind has more creative power than a mans mind. Even though a man has more physical power than a woman ( in most cases, I am speaking in general here.) The right side of the brain is seen as feminine, and this is the side of the brain that creates, and gives birth to new ideas, cultures, music, movies, art, books, etc ( notice the term give birth) The mans strength is that he can take the creativity of a woman and materialize it and bring it to life using math, logic, organization, structure, and etc functions which are mostly controlled by the left brain. I say all of that to say that yes the Feminine principle is very very powerful and I wish more woman were respected and elevated to that level but the Masculine principle is also necessary in order to keep balance and order. To conclude this long diatribe may I also recommend a book to you ladies "Does Women Exist" by Dario Salas a very special and fantastic creature. I think both of you ladies may benefit from this book.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Dominique Lambright

11 Years Ago

Thanks for your words lol. I would definitely not categorize you with the men who are pigs and have .. read more
Malcolmveli

11 Years Ago

lol yes I would like not to be categorized with those pigs lol. Yes your opinions maybe strong after.. read more
Dominique Lambright

11 Years Ago

Haha possibly.
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Sigh.
We are emotionally unstable, dramatic. We are crazy, possessive, insecure, sex objects, maids, the list goes. Yet no one would be here if it weren't for a woman.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dominique Lambright

11 Years Ago

Exactly, so I do not see how men can be so unappreciative. They treat women like s**t sometimes with.. read more
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11 Years Ago

It's crazy, really. When we speak up, we are feminists. If we say nothing we are submissive. If we h.. read more
Dominique Lambright

11 Years Ago

Lol yes it is haha

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Added on February 23, 2013
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Dominique Lambright
Dominique Lambright

Milwaukee , WI



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