27.

You want me or her?
Have you lost your mind
There is no other
You are my girl.

The one you created in your head,
Please, kill her
I'm not her.

Reviews

[Alfred Kukitz]

This is the kind of murder that shows conviction.

Regards,
Al

[Ellen Kolman]

Great short poem. ..to the point and true...we all think the same thing

[Farhan Shaikh]

Powerful poem and very strong..

[Donicca Dona L]

Thank you :)

[keith]

i read this poem more than once, more than twice and then, yet again.
so simple, so powerful, so perfect.
were i the 'other' ... there would be no choice but to obey.
so beautiful ... absolutely beautiful

[Donicca Dona L]

well thank you so much for the kind words. it's a bit far from perfect.
''the other'' in this case stands as an answer giving from him to HER, he haven't an other girl than her.
the point is he hadn't understood the question but he did when she answered
The one you created in your head,
Please, kill her
I'm not her.

[keith]

maybe he isn't the one?

I still say it is perfect!

the power you have with pen and paper is unlimited ... it is your thought, it is your soul.

well done donicca, well done.

[Donicca Dona L]

Maybe who knows.
it's just the heart that needs to accept that.

thank you for your review

[Mélania Woolf]

When you suffer to disentangle You from the You people want you to become..

[Donicca Dona L]

somehow I just wanna be not become :)