The Ultimate Betrayal ღ KKD ღ

The Ultimate Betrayal          The words spoken you say came from the heart Yet now they are so different than what was vowed at the start   In the beginning you would sooth my heart with words from yours Yet now you just stand there with each one being a chore   Please tell me that the end for us is not at hand and that the time has not come to remove this golden band.   Why can't you say what I want to hear Why must you make reality of my greatest fear.   Why did you wander from our bed It is this knife in my heart that leaves it dead.   Be off with you and never to return for the vow you just broke in hell you will burn. ღ KKD ღ Original by Donna DeLong Matthews January 2004   Phil Collins In The Air Tonight View All My Poems

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[Windy]

WOW, now I have to say I really like this one. For so many different reasons! This song is one of my favorites by the way. "Be off with you fand never return for the vow you just broke in hell you will burn" There is so much feeling in this, the anger just reaches out and grabs you. I can relate at times. There is a saddness and fear in the "air" as well. Job superbly done. ;)