Couplet: That window

Where do you watch your happiness from?

As I view happiness, through a closed window,

I feel my heart drowning, in a pool of sorrow.

- Stu. T.H. (December 5, 2023)

Reviews

[Dave Brown]

fortunately there are many windows to look through
There could likely be at least one other that would display something that was not sorrowful?

[Stu. T.H.]

I think it's quite dependent on the person, author Dave Brown. Not all homes have many windows, and not all people have many social connections. Just like with windows, one must allow another hole to be made in their barricaded home in order to have a better chance to get a better view of the world outside. It just depends on the person.

[poetgurl (Plainly Meg)]

Excellent writing here, love the form as well.

[Stu. T.H.]

Thank you for your kind visit, author Plainly Meg. It's always pleasant to see you around, I wish you pleasant weather to accompany your day.