DRAWN

Synthetic twines

braided together

swinging from the creaky beams.

Is it strong? too long?

Will it hold?

Drawn like a bee to nector.

Towels, tape and pipe

to buy

will trap the fumes within.

Gasp and choke?

Or drift to sleep?

Drawn like an addict to ice.

Gleaming metal

clean and sharp

glides through tender flesh.

Fast or slow?

Will I go deep enough?

Drawn like and alcoholic to liquor.

Winding road

along the cliffs edge

just a little veer to the right.

Fire? explosion?

Would I be identified?

Drawn like a gambler to money.

That tall tower

or a large bridge over water

to float free like a bird.

Scream or silence?

Who would find me?

Drawn like a Mosquito to blood.

Glistening cylinder

slides into place

squeezing tight the trigger.

Loud? Pain?

Who will clean the mess?

Drawn like tides to the moon.

Rainbow colors

small, round and smooth

my magic cocktail awaits.

Swallow, Drink, Swallow, Drink

Have I taken enough?

Drawn like me to you.

Reviews

[Devious13]

Bravi!! Bravo!!wonderful for sure no doubt in My mind, no wrds!! s o un love with this piece is great

[Mary Bosworth]

This is an excellent descriptive poem that flows exceptionally well as well as creating nice visuals

[Baby Ricochet]

This is some serial killer s**t right here.

[K Scott Smith]

Good for you. You write this very well indeed.