A Poem by The Ugly Rose

Oh, sweet embrace
A kiss
A touch
No, just a glance.

Oh, lovely eyes
Those lips
Those hands
No, just a dream.

Oh, promising hope
My future
My desire
A life!
No, just a lie.

© 2010 The Ugly Rose

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this is beautiful!! the passion is captured so beautifully and the emotion is well expressed here. Good Job

Posted 9 Years Ago

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Its gorgeous! The passion would've been lost if it were too long, and you captured the emotion wonderfully.

Posted 10 Years Ago

It's short, but still holds emotion. Very nicely done ^^. Love the repeating 'No, just a ...'

Posted 10 Years Ago

i love this! i'd completely ditch the last stanza though. i think it holds up on its own without that last one. the last one makes it seem like you are editorializing it. the rest is amazing!

Posted 10 Years Ago

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Added on January 24, 2010
Last Updated on March 2, 2010


The Ugly Rose
The Ugly Rose

Calgary, Canada

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