A Poem by The Ugly Rose

Oh, sweet embrace
A kiss
A touch
No, just a glance.

Oh, lovely eyes
Those lips
Those hands
No, just a dream.

Oh, promising hope
My future
My desire
A life!
No, just a lie.

© 2010 The Ugly Rose

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this is beautiful!! the passion is captured so beautifully and the emotion is well expressed here. Good Job

Posted 9 Years Ago

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Its gorgeous! The passion would've been lost if it were too long, and you captured the emotion wonderfully.

Posted 9 Years Ago

It's short, but still holds emotion. Very nicely done ^^. Love the repeating 'No, just a ...'

Posted 10 Years Ago

i love this! i'd completely ditch the last stanza though. i think it holds up on its own without that last one. the last one makes it seem like you are editorializing it. the rest is amazing!

Posted 10 Years Ago

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Added on January 24, 2010
Last Updated on March 2, 2010


The Ugly Rose
The Ugly Rose

Calgary, Canada

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