Begin Anew

The way we go

is what we choose.

If we fall short

of what we care about most,

you might lose it for forever.

We all have a past

indeed, good or bad.

At what cost?

Glory, honour,

without pride comes discernment.

In our pasts we can look forward

we can begin anew,

Our downfalls can become our arising,

many a night come and go.

But we are here to stay, to the end.

For we will begin anew

Author's Note

Please stop reviewing without commenting

Reviews

[Evan]

Gr8 p0em m8. m4d3 m3 cry s0 h4rd

[Riley Justine]

This is really good! I would maybe just add some more punctuation to tell the reader where they're supposed to pause Also make sure you're capitalizing where it is needed.

[Zac]

OK, thank you for the constructive criticism!

[Egwu Tedd]

lovely.. The poem has deep meaning

[Zac]

Thank you for the review

[Melinda McQueen]

I like this. There is much truth to it.
A good write. Thanks for sharing. :)

[Zac]

Thank you very much

[Rachel]

This is a really good poem!

[Zac]

Thank you very much
any opinions on what to change about it?

[Rachel]

Well I am not so experienced in the art of poetry, but this one seems very good to me. It is haunting and very well written. The only thing I can think to say is keep it up!

[Zac]

Thanks
you too