A Poem by Dream Hunter

A short dialogue in the form of poetry between two good friends, comforting each other in times of hardship.

To break a heart
To heal it
To break a soul
To mend it
To shatter a world
A heart
A soul
A brokenhearted 
friend in need.

To heal a broken heart
To mend a broken soul
To give a broken heart and soul
The help and love it needs.
This is my sole compassion
This is my sole quest
Together we shall fight
Those who shatter our fragile worlds.

Fear is always in our hearts
A cold finger 'round our souls
But with our friends
Fear not the things
We must brave in life alone.
Instead discard the lives we led
Of wicked, miserable deeds
That sprouted from our loneliness
And the friends we did not heed
So now, my friend, please take my hand
And lead me where you may
And heal my broken heart and soul
With your friendship every day.

© 2012 Dream Hunter

Author's Note

Dream Hunter
When I am not so happy, I get inspiration from my friends that cheer me up, all the time. Thank you to all my awesome friends! :)

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This is the finest poem of them all. Certainly the most great ,I've read, of all time. The most beloved. Your command of feelings, the most magnificent. You transformed the feelings you seemed be going through into ecstatic beauty. Pain is easy to portray but to use your passion and pain to portray the ecstasy and joy and magnificence of our world... No one I know has ever done it before. Perhaps no one ever will again. To my mind, that strange feeling I get when I read this... that is not only one of the finest poems I have ever read, but it provokes me to move on too.

Posted 9 Years Ago

Awesome poem!

Posted 9 Years Ago

Very intriguing. A very entertaining read.

Posted 9 Years Ago

Great job! Very unique!

Posted 9 Years Ago

I loved it! The conversational poem between two friends was a nice touch. This is the first time I have read one of your works and it is different from others I have read but nonetheless I enjoyed it. xD

Posted 9 Years Ago

This was such a great poem. So refreshing! It also gave me a kind of chilling feeling, maybe because of the repetition, and then the lines,

"Fear is always in our hearts
A cold finger 'round our souls"

but then at the end, I felt all warm inside. Really sweet.

Posted 9 Years Ago

I like the dialogue between the two friends. Great idea!

Posted 9 Years Ago

it seems like a song created out of love

Posted 9 Years Ago

This reminds me of either a musical or some sort of play. Either way, it could be used, and I found it quite brilliant. Keep up the wonderful writing. ^^

Posted 9 Years Ago

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Added on March 10, 2012
Last Updated on May 27, 2012
Tags: friends, comfort, comforting, hardship, heart, soul, break, in, need, shatter, world, dialogue, good, poetry, encouraging, encouragement


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