Devine Farewell

Pale flesh,

Crimson rose petals,

The intricate backdrop,

Of a devine death.

Her black hair falls around her porcelain face.

Her lover sobs into his hands.

Cracked, bloody palms, and tar coated finger nails. 

The immensity of his melancholy,

Sends tremors all through him.

Beautiful death.

Happiness is rare,

And likely impossible in this case,

Yet, 

The man finds himself uplifted.

Her delicate, feathery hand,

Rests on his shouldier,

He glances back,

"I will always be here, Oberon. Do not worry."

She faded...

His angel was there,

And he realized, 

She always would be,

Always.

Carassing the face of his timeless angel,

One last farewell was in order,

But forever, it would not always stay.

He would see her again.

A devine rekindling,

Of a devine farewell.

Reviews

[JulieÉmile]

My hear goes out to this poor lady. I think she went through a lot of suffering before this death. The boy of course suffers the worst for he has to live without her.

The way you have depicted this mournful story is just excellent. It takes a lot of talent to arrange words in such an elegant manner. Thank you for sharing this.

[unsavable_soul]

I love of the deathly nature as well,
This piece is very sleek and elegant, very descriptive of her qualities. Especially in the usage and placement of death as a descriptive factor of her, whom ever she may be. Ah, but to basically be in love with death and then to be denied is only for the briefest of time. I notice the use of the name Oberon is that as in the Fairy King of old such as Midsummer Nights Dream? Just curious either way I love this piece and applaud your creativity.
Very nice.
Sincerely
Christopher
100/100

[Account Closed]

Intense description and great wording. I liked this piece.

[Nami Machae]

my heart sang with sadness when i read this. very nice write

[The Girl That Let You G..]

Saddeningly beautiful. Wonderful write :)

[Roxii]

This piece showed wonderful fluitivity and great word power. I greatly enjoyed reading this.

[K.S.78]

"The immensity of his melancholy," - this is a really great line! The imagery is terrific also. I somberly enjoyed this piece. ;)

[chaotic katie]

i like this piece! nicely penned!

[Simon Welsh]

I like! This is well written.

[sounds of shadows]

quite lovely