Tatts

A little poem I wrote about my dream guy. It's not very emotional but it hints at some feelings. Please don't hate me because I like guys who express themselves through body art...

Black hair, dark as a jet,

Tattoos so menacing, 

Yet to me, not a threat.

 

Blue eyes, so immense

Plugs gauged in your ears,

Intense.

 

Smile, as white as the Sun,

My heart;

Already won.

 

Though vanity,

Has not decided this newfound crush,

Just the thought of being in your arms, gives me this rush.

Determined,

To forget who I was,

By embracing you, will I feel loved?

 

My eyes only hide the truth,

And my arms, to,

Grew up to fast, it destroyed my youth.

 

So bring me back,

So I can breathe again,

In the arms, of a man with tatts.

Author's Note

The pic used for the poem is Tony from Pierce The Veil <3
THIS was really hard because I could not decide on pics.
Sowwy >.< I love them all.

Reviews

[unsavable_soul]

I really like this,
I personally am a fan of tatts on a woman, done tastefully often punkesque is very much a visual appeal, placement and contrast are everything. That said I love the sentiments and emotion in this I thought though perhaps your beginning might have more a descriptive beauty you seem to naturally have in the latter portion. Eh just a little more time on the way you say what you say. Hahahaaa
I made a funny, so be careful not to step in that.
Seriously though, good write and I think self definition in the form of what we want in others that might be permanent emotional investments is ever important. Trust me don't settle when you set ideals, even if others call you vain. Mr./Ms. right will come along, or at least close enough.
Much love Bubbling Brooke.
Sincerely
Christopher
100/100
P.s. Thanks for the read request sorry for my slacker disposition of late.

[Graveyardfuck]

It's fine :)

[unsavable_soul]

#_# thanks.

[K.S.78]

I really like that you did a type of visual poetry that's awesome! Really great stanzas too! :)

[Account Closed]

Its interesting but not really deep. It shows what you love but not why you love it, you know?

[chaotic katie]

i love pierce the veil! great piece!