Is My Relationship Poisoning Me

I have a girlfriend

Whom I love till the world's end

Who is always there for me

But is that harming me

I love her like crazy

And that makes sadness hazy

And she is happy with me

But is that poisoning me

I am in a fix

Which no solution can fix

My friends think that this is harming me

But is that truly harming me

I am messaging her all the time

During the class all the time

Unable to concentrate on anything

Unable to do anything

Need a solution now

Before I call her now

God help me

I don't how will I save me

Reviews

[Thea Fuentebella]

i think there are some wrong grammars there.. i'm not sure.
it's a good one. a serious, troubled concept but it made me smile. the simpleness of your poems are very beautiful. it's also very different. wow

[Jeff]

Great job on this one! Love can be very dangerous and overwhelming.

[An owl on the moon]

You express that thrilling part of love so well.. the part that just takes over and is like a fire. True, one must come to a place of containing that fire when other things must be done, but love is a powerful force indeed!

[sarah]

I think this is sweet it's great you love her but a little space is good for a relationship