Mr. Teddy

Feeling Helpless at Times and hanging on through the help of Somethiong/somebody it may be human or non-human

I was awaken by a loud shrill of siren

And I found myself trapped inside a glowing room

I looked for a place to hide but I can’t find any.

At a small corner I found myself a refuge.

I hugged Mr. Teddy tight and I found some security.

I was calling Mama but no one’s answering me.

Papa left us and now who’s gonna save me?

Slowly I found myself finding it hard to breathe.

The tears slightly cooled down my sweating face.

My eyes soon find it hard to open up.

“Mr. Teddy, you’ll gonna save me ain’t yah?”

The lights getting nearer, and it’s getting hotter.

“Mr. Teddy please don’t leave me,

It’s only you that I have got now.”

I cuddled him closer as I lay on the floor.

At the last glimpse of him, still he is smiling.

“Thank you Mr. Teddy for not leaving me.”

Mr. Teddy was now very dirty.

I was hoping that he can breathe.

Because it seems now that I can’t.

The sounds of the siren’s fading.

My vision’s getting blurry.

Slowly.

Slowly.

Everything’s black now.

The siren’s gone.

 

Author's Note

It's up to you to fill up for the ending... ^^,)

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