Living In Your Name

Written during 9th grade.

Do you feel it?
The burning that I feel.
And it reads "lie"
For all the dishonesty
And lack of trust.
Exhileration,
But not nearly as much
As what you give me.
It will never replace
The burning,
The burning of your eyes,
Nor the ghost of them,
And it's haunting.
Lie,
Embedded in the mind.
Don't you dare forget
The words I never said,
Never leaving the tip of my tounge.
But you knew.
And even when I lie,
You're just left to wonder,
Because you know it isn't the truth.
I can't lie to you anymore,
Nor explain,
Nor tell you the words
On the tip of my tounge.
And even if I was gone,
You'd still think I was here.
Did you know that I live in your name?

Reviews

[RAWR!]

lyrical
vivid
very imaginary

"Don't you dare forget
The words I never said,
Never leaving the tip of my tounge.
But you knew."

simply brilliant

"And even when I lie,
You're just left to wonder,
Because you know it isn't the truth."

again very very nice.

keep on writing and expressing yourself.