Lost

Written during 9th grade.

Have you ever tasted a cloud?

So silky smooth,

You could breathe it in forever.

But you see,

Forever was just a word,

And I see now,

I want to be lost.

Lost looking up

To a dark midnight sky

Whispy feather clouds

Surrounding pearl moon,

Then feeling the rain come in.

Rain like the pooring

And running down the hills,

Singing

"I'm alive, I'm alive"

With best ever friends

Making memories by the minute,

That's what I live for

And I want to be lost.

Reviews

[Yaooooooo]

Why run away? I had to read your poem twice before i got the mood or the setting. At the end im still a little confuce by it. Is like you are embracing the night, but still runing away from it. So where is that you are running to, or why? Maybe im reading it wrong....
Thanks for sharing and keep it up....
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