Doomsday Falling

Doomsday Falling

A Poem by Breezie Kae
"

Written during sophomore year.

"
Previous Version
This is a previous version of Doomsday Falling.



It marks down so suddenly

And your voice is all I hear

Peace falls right in front of me

When it all comes down to fear

 

So peace, dissolve,

Into a system

I have no more

Promises to keep

 

So please, come down

And declare me, victim

And lose it all

Like minty shallow stares

 

I’m sick to the stomach,

Please numb me

With anything conveniently more

 

I’m sick to the stomach,

Please numb me

With anything conveniently more

 

My mind is swelling

The room is falling

I know that this will be

You know I don’t want

Another taste but

I know that this will be

 

You speak so suddenly

And my guard’s dropped down again

Your words soak so tenderly

For what I’d give to the end

 

So come, blur

Straight into the system

And when the end comes

You’re the one I breathe for

 

And when I test these waters

Will you be there to make amends?

All I owe you is a promise

And to be your friend

 

So pull me from the surface

You don’t know what your grip does

 

My mind is swelling

The room is falling

I know that this will be

You know I don’t want

Another taste but

I know that this will be

 

I’m sick to the stomach,

Please numb me

With anything conveniently more

 

I’m sick to the stomach,

Please numb me

With anything conveniently more

 

I’m sick to the stomach,

Please numb me

With anything conveniently more

 

I’m sick to the stomach,

Please numb me

With anything convenient…

 

© 2009 Breezie Kae




Reviews

breezie, you are so talented. i don't know if i tell you this enough, but you really are. you have a way with words that i envy. i love you girl :) oh, and i love this by the way...

This review was written for a previous version of this writing

Posted 14 Years Ago



Share This
Email
Facebook
Twitter
Request Read Request
Add to Library My Library
Subscribe Subscribe


Stats

14 Views
1 Review
Added on September 13, 2009
Last Updated on September 13, 2009