Inferiority Complex

Inferiority Complex

A Poem by Breezie Kae
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Written (mostly) during the summer between sophomore and junior year.

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Can you see the sun?

You’re not the only one

You’re dead by complex

See where you’ve begun

 

See where life is done

And even when it’s done

It’s all so worthless

See where the sun goes down

 

And clear clouds seem to dance

You won’t get your second chance

See if faith lets down at all

 

It’s all in the romance

If you fancy

Of satellites falling down

 

And all these twisted thoughts

They all fall down

They all fall down

(If you stop giving up)

All these empty thoughts

They all fall down

They all fall down

 

You can evolve

 

So are you gonna fall?

The world isn’t so small

You’ve got this mindset

You can sing along

 

And nothing will go wrong

And even when it’s wrong

You’ve got this sixth sense

You can watch the moon catch fire

 

And colors behind your eyelids

You’re slowly learning how to live

You’ve only got one chance to know

 

It’s all in this distance

So get ready

And you can set this world on fire

 

And all these twisted thoughts

They all fall down

They all fall down

If you stop giving up

All these empty thoughts

They all fall down

They all fall down

 

And all these twisted thoughts

They all fall down

They all fall down

If you stop giving up

All these empty thoughts

They all fall down

They all fall down

 

You can evolve

(If you want to)

You can resolve

(This impromptu)

All of these feelings stop making sense

As you need, bleed, plead this ignorance

In defense

Of a world so shattered

It’s all your fault

But it won’t matter

Because you’re gonna to reach someday

All the things you wish for today

 

And all these twisted thoughts

They all fall down

They all fall down

If you stop giving up

All these empty thoughts

They all fall down

They all fall down

 

And all these twisted thoughts

They all fall down

They all fall down

If you stop giving up

All these empty thoughts

They all fall down

They all fall down

 

You can evolve

And all these twisted thoughts

They all fall down

They all fall down

If you stop giving up

All these empty thoughts

They all fall down

They all fall down

 

You can evolve

 

© 2010 Breezie Kae




Reviews

very good! i love it!(even though it took me a while to read) when it says "And nothing will go wring
And even when it's wrong" did you mean wring or wrong ?

This review was written for a previous version of this writing

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