Unwind (So Damn Beautiful)

Unwind (So Damn Beautiful)

A Poem by Breezie Kae
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8/31/2009.

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Cruising tonight with a velvet glow

Wind beneath your nails tingle in your toes

Where it goes hell no one knows

but you know

That it’s so damn beautiful

So goddamn beautiful

 

Bust that bottle and take a toll

take a little time and just let it flow

making up for the time you stole

but if you say it’s so

Just don’t tell me it ain’t beautiful

Cause it’s so damn beautiful

 

You’ve got so much going for you

You’ve got this freedom in a tune

You can let it all unwind or just break off

So give this life just one more chance

Take some time for love skip the romance

And maybe this time it will be enough

Cause it’s so damn beautiful

So damn beautiful

 

Early riser just to see the sun rise

Stay up late, hanging moon in the sky

Got your speakers up and the time is right

So back up cause why

Cause it’s so damn beautiful

So goddamn beautiful

 

And when it gets dark yeah you can cry

but it’s moments like these and I know just why

Feel it soft but strong luminescent sky

and let out a sigh

Cause it’s so damn beautiful

Just so goddamn beautiful

 

You’ve got so much going for you

You’ve got this freedom in a tune

You can let it all unwind or just break off

So give this life just one more chance

Take some time for love skip the romance

And maybe this time it will be enough

Cause it’s so damn beautiful

So damn beautiful

 

So damn beautiful

(Sidewalk, concrete, black road, blacktop

highway, no way, sweet talk, let’s rock

Sidewalk, concrete, black road, blacktop

highway, no way, sweet talk, let's rock)


Just so goddamn beautiful

(Sidewalk, concrete, black road, blacktop

highway, no way, sweet talk, let’s rock

Sidewalk, concrete, black road, blacktop

Highway, no way, sweet talk, let's rock)

 

Sidewalk, concrete, black road, blacktop

highway, no way, sweet talk, let’s rock

 

© 2009 Breezie Kae




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Cee
This is beautiful! Honestly I am just blown away. You did a wonderful job, I wish I could hear what it actually sounds like as a song. I'm sure it's incredible! I hope to see more from you soon.

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