Just Like Yesterday

Just Like Yesterday

A Poem by Breezie Kae
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Written in 8th grade.

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I don’t even know anymore

What I’m doing here

Lost let knowing

Exactly where I stand

And it doesn’t make sense.

I know if I stop caring

It won’t matter anymore

But I do care

Care for you.

So I spend another day

Saying today I’ll change everything

Just like yesterday

And the day before

And I do nothing

But maybe it’s meant that way.

© 2009 Breezie Kae




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So I spend another day
Saying today I'll change everything
Just like yesterday
And the day before
And I do nothing
But maybe it's meant that way.

brilliant!! i love how you end this with just a shrug and acceptance. the title fits this just perfectly, and it's so true how we can all feel despair almost at our faults and we resolve to change, but in the end realise we can't. really well written, kudos for you my friend!

This review was written for a previous version of this writing

Posted 17 Years Ago


We all feel this way at times. You have said it very well indeed. It is as if we are in limbo even as
our minds are moving on. We seem to stay stuck in the rut that is our lives. I think the flow could be improved by droping a word here or there but overall a very nice piece.
Debby

This review was written for a previous version of this writing

Posted 17 Years Ago



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Added on February 9, 2008
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