Through Emptiness

Through Emptiness

A Poem by Breezie Kae
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Written in 8th grade.

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Ignorance
In hidden bliss
Rainbow painted in the sky
Viewed only through the eyes
Of the heavenly.
And I still believe
In destinies,
But why is it so hard to reach?
What if we never do?
When destiny
Is not to achieve
But die in pain.
Is it meant to be?
We only meet bliss
And happiness
When it's all over
And time to say goodnight
One final time.

© 2009 Breezie Kae


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good reminder to open our eyes and live in the moment so we can truly experience the happy times in our life...thank you.

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Posted 16 Years Ago


3 of 3 people found this review constructive.

Viewed only through the eyes
Of the heavenly

i really like this! and the above 2 lines are my favourite.

is it time to say goodnight? but im not sleepy yet...

This review was written for a previous version of this writing

Posted 16 Years Ago


3 of 3 people found this review constructive.


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Added on February 8, 2008
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