Resolution

Written in 8th grade.

Looking for endings
among the chapters;
never quite resolved,
never final.
They weren't lying
when they said love lasts forever.
Why couldn't they be lying?
Where is a solution
when there is no conclusion,
to thoughts running free,
to you and to me?
On an over-poetic life,
it makes me sick
to the point where I hide
from the eyes of you.

Reviews

[Busola Laditan]

"And they weren't lying
When they said love lasts forever.
Why couldn't they be lying?"
I love the message in these lines.
It's really very true. I do think that the middle line could
be better. But i don't know. Still this was good, i liked it.

[Being.john.sweet~The Ev..]

this is very nicely done, reminds me of the impermanence of life and subtle excitement trying to read as fast as one can...then the ending takes that all away...good job, thank you.