Look at you.

Look at you.

A Poem by Duplicate_
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This is another lame thing. But HEY :D

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I look at you one day and smile.
Because we're happy together.
Because you love me.
Because we're 'us'

I look at you one week and laugh.
Because you're so cute.
Because you love me.
Because we're 'us'

I look at you one month and chuckle.
Because you blushed.
Because you love me.
Because we're 'us'.

I look at you one year and I stare.
Because you're gone.
But you loved me?
But we're 'us'?

I look at you in the past and I wonder.
What went wrong.
I thought you loved me.
What happened to us?

I look at you now and I cry.
Because you're smiling.
Because you love her.
Because we lost 'us'

I look at me now and I hurt.
Not because you're smiling.
Not because you love her.
But because I'm not here anymore.

I wonder when you look at me, are you hurt?
Are you hurt because I'm not smiling?
Are you hurt because I'm not her?

No. Of course you're not.

© 2010 Duplicate_


Author's Note

Duplicate_
Ignore it if it sounds kinda bad. I'm sorry x.x

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At first i thought the poem was going to be all about love, but i like how you changed it, the moment you did it captivated me, and i was more intrigued in reading it, i really like the ending it was strong and sad, it was a good write :)

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Duplicate_

Stardust, Australia



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I'm a 15 year old girl living in the slow side of Australia, WA. The simple things in life are the ones that give me the most pleasure. I'm stubborn and extremely blunt; meaning I tell you what I thin.. more..

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