Of She and Sky

Traditional..sure I can do that

The light upon her face reflects

A curve, kissed beauty glistens here

An eye, of heaven without peer

In heart, a praise to genuflect

 

In soul, a man is weak to thee

In mind, a lift of calming breeze

A glance, a tender grin to please

To touch the skin that He conceived

 

In death, welcome the depth of fire

The bed, invites eternal rest

My love, a shroud to wrap my view

 

In dark, my headstone kisses sky

The bell, a ring she waves a crest

She licks the final breath I drew

 

Reviews

[Jūdan FyreHeart]

Very soft and open compared to your other work I've read. Almost graceful it's dance along the facade.

[Quinn Blackburn]

this piece wrings the last drops out of life, savoring both bitterness and sweetness. well done!

[Tim Lion]

beautiful and haunting

[seema]

thAT was beautiful....reminds me of my boyfriend

[Siddartha Beth Pierce]

Delightfully dreamy - surreal, sublime and right on time. Nicely penned. Thanks.
Light,
Siddartha

[theunionisloud]

Fire.

[Midnight_Mystery]

i love your work, such strong emotions, and the imagery your discriptions depict is great. keep writing..im def. gonna keep reading :)

[Princess3Morag]

Wow, this is so amazing :) The rhyming is also well done and complements the poem. And you're right, you sure can do traditional :P hihi

[Sydney Evans]

This is really beautiful and it really speaks too you.

[Alice]

THis is beautiful.