SWEETHEART

 

SWEETHEART

 

Your eyes are pools of misery

your heart is pure gold

I wish that You could feel my warmth

`fore I got so dog gone old

 

Yur just the sweetest  woman

That I have ever known

Remind me of my old horse

Before I was fully grown

 

Come lay yur tender body next to mine

An tell me that you love me one more time

For the good times Sweethearrt

Whoever you are

 

----  John

Reviews

[Eagle Cruagh]

Whoever you are----
I truly hope you are well,
Imogean. This is so mindful of you that I just
could not resist saying;
HELLO !
-- John Crowley (aka Eagle Cruagh)

[Rogue]

Hahahahaha you do have a way with words, Cowboy.

And in that context this is very sweet. Quirky, but sweet none the less. :)

[Poussiere D'Ange]

The part where you compare your sweet heart with your old horse seems really interesting to me. The whole piece was really sweet and feeling were beautifully expressed. I really enjoyed reading this:-):-):-D.

[Frieda P]

I'm not sure I'd be so tickled if I reminded you of your old horse, yet, it's sweet in a quirky sort of way. Don't get Barney...old I imagine? Or funny perhaps...

[K-mo]

very lovely and heartfelt piece, I truly like it a lot:)

[Meliss@k]

aw, this literally made me say "awww" out loud. :) Very sweet and simply put and I overall really enjoyed his poem. :)

[Kriss_Rose]

I love this. Very sweet! :)

[Katie]

It's sweet :)

[Muse]

ahhh...what a sweet way of expressing one's sentiments. You can...and DO...write pretty when you want to. Funny...well yes you can write blunt and funny too. :))

[Nautili]

such a surprise ending....that you do not yet have this dear one in your life....here is hoping she appears before the sun sets...

Reminds me of an Appalachian hillsong.