HILL AIRIUS

HILL AIRIUS

 

Hill Airius went to hell in a handbasket

And the divil brought him right back

The divil said "no laffin" . "I wantum dead"
So Airius fled

 

But Airius knew they`d ketchim cause he done wrong

He went right back and made amends

To the great spirit on the mountain

He took the guy`s wife and sent her home

 

Then Airius knew he done good

He sent up a signal to the spirit of the plains

But he miss spelled his sin

And the Great Spirit sent him back again.

 

This is enuff

Airius is done

I rezine

This is no fun

 

----- Eagle Cruagh

Reviews

[icelandicblue]

Who knew spell check could be so important. A fun little ditty you've penned for poor Arius who seemed doomed by his poor choices or perhaps he was having a bit of a run of bad luck.

[Mary]

Ah poor Arius- no fun for him but lots for anyone reading your poem. If one must go to hell, a hand basket is a stylin' way to go. Else, I should brush up on my smoke signals, hehe. Well done!

[just Penny]

I never realised the devil could be so pedantic ! I like the concept of going to hell in a handbasket - could be a whole new write right there, full of fire and brimstone:) I liked this poem, it's different. Penny

[iliOZ]

i am trying to catch my breath after running up and down with you.
i was "sweatin’ like a w***e in church while fleein'" ... it was s fun.

[Sioranth Smith]

I loved this, especially because I had some inner southern redneck doing the reading for me in my head. :)

[Rosalind Gale]

You really are a quizzical and most flotsam of jetsam bum. But we like each other. Reply in a year.
-xx-

[Irma Chavez]

comical
explorative
dynamique

[Meliss@k]

Very unique an different from the rest of your poems. I liked it, refreshing in a morbid way lol

[Luvjael]

I really liked this one. It is extremely creative. Different and I like that. Very good. Thank you for sharing.

[Poussiere D'Ange]

Haha I've been going through some of your poems and I love the way you use these accents. It just adds the perfect kick to your writing, something that automatically makes one smile. This was a fun little bubble. Poor Airius:-):-):-D.