WHO --- IN THE WORLD

Can you find the girl from the description ?

 

 

WHO -- IN THE WORLD

 

Prettier girls, must be

Have seen not all

Wonder if she

No, she is much too sweet

Does she

No, imagination is not enough

 

Speak languages maybe

Not wasted on the multitude

In love perhaps

No, she is above that

Now here is a thought

 

Just examine her

find the nubbins of

Little wings sprouting

Just there

She`s a bloody Angel

 

-----Eagle Cruagh

Reviews

[x]

Who has not found themselves, at some stage, aloof from life and searching their world for a connection. Its all here in this contemplating poem. I see the writer standing on the clifftop and looking down over his sea of connections, searching for the only one that can turn the key. He holds his precious wish list in his hands and with his eyes closed, he slips beneath the glossy surface of life and allows 'feeling' to find that longed for connection and in doing so, discovers an angel.

[E. A. Fielder]

hmm I thought this was a cute poem! You didn't over dramatize the image! I like that!

[Stephie204]

I love this! Very sweet!

[S. Liberace]

well, i can certainly say that this is a nice poem.
the use of stream of consciousness caught my eye, and so did the wording.
i wonder what inspired you to write this poem? perhaps the ignorance of a younger generation? the blond haired, blue-eyed temptation?
i do so wonder.

[Nae Nae]

This is very ...Different. Not easy to follow but very intruiging still.

Nae-Nae ...

[Freedom]

Beautifully written. I absolutely agree will Thewill's review; I see in this poem a man contemplating his connections. I love your conviction in writing. I also love the honesty, how you weren't trying to mirror a thought process as much as actually write a real thought process...do you know what I mean?

Thank you for sharing. =] I enjoyed reading this.

[linley{luu}]

John

Made me think of
Someone I saw on the way to church today.
He smiled at me.
Such a bright, nice smile.
Couldn't get it out of my head.
And then the preacher talked
Of angels and God, and that man's smile
Came up again. Into my head.

I enjoyed this a lot. Thanks for the smiles.

Yours

Corn Syrup Girl

[K.D.Storm]

It seems like the thoughts passing through some one when they see the "angel" in a stranger they seem not to be able to get out of their head. It has a nice feel of mystery to it.

[deeps]

I really enjoy this write
I find it really sweet and sincere.
This is very lovely and profound.

[Naomi Montana Walsh]

I love the style this is written in.. it comes off as a pondering unedited from thought to page..I like it

[Debra Stevens Edwards (..]

John, this is a profound write and the clip like glimpses seem a bit like thoughts that flash through the readers mind, as he contemplates this astounding revelation. I even liked the thoughts he now feels are wrong. Although he has forgotten that friends are angels God sends to help us through the rough times.
Hugs Debby