WHERE MY LOVE

 

WHERE MY LOVE

 

From Flanders fields

To poppy land

Through gardens planted

With love by hand

 

From the Cliffs of Mohare

Through the Irish sea

The search goes on

For you and me

 

A simple seed

Was fondly laid

To bud and blossom

In sun and shade

 

Though wisdom lost

Her fond embrace

The search goes on

For her tear stained face

 

----  Eagle Cruagh

Reviews

[Joanna Maharis]

I love all of the images throughout this piece, but my favorite are the last four lines.

"Though wisdom lost
Her fond embrace
The search goes on
For her tear stained face"

I found these lines in particular to be deeply moving. Thank you so much for sharing such a beautiful piece of artistry.

[Greg the Bard]

Short and sweet. This really good, The rhyme is wonderful and the images up beat. I hope this is about a Grandchild.Great Work

[YouoweYoupay]

This poem has a sad atmosphere and a longing for a familiar loved face. To the point adorned with simple yet colorful images. Lovely.

-Wella.

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how utterly enchanting..

[Lovely Lady]

the search.... sweet and simple yet full of emotion. Another great poem.
~lovely

[Morning Star]

You write so eloquently

A simple seed

Was fondly laid

To bud and blossom

In sun and shade

Though wisdom lost

Her fond embrace

This lines here where writing with the quill of your heart
Such beautiful imagery captured by your words
And the voice wow i felt like i was in Ireland
Magnificent flow and rhyming its just outstanding
Kudos!
Have a fantastic Day.....Yolie

[bbb]

This one takes me away...through the Irish sea...I also feel longing when I read this, whether that is the intent of the poem or not. Searching and longing...the joy of reading this type of work is when you can feel it.

[FeliciaS (Poetic Prince..]

This is so beautiful :)

[Marie Harrison]

What a gentle string of prose. I enjoyed the images and the message all throughout the poem. I'm leaving with a sense of peace.

[NoneOfYourBusiness akaK..]

a lovely melanchoy poetic~ yet painted with faith in possibilities~ a fine equilibrium achieved in context~