IN YOUR MIND

IN YOUR MIND

 

Create the world

In your mind

You are maker of

Your destiny

 

As you think

So it becomes

I think

Therefore I am

 

Plan

Work your plan

Admire

Become

 

Plant

Harvest

Sow

Reap

 

Your world

 

---- Eagle Cruagh

Reviews

[Zae]

Simple and Perfect

[Quill~]

A great write! As writers we "plant, harvest, sow, and reap" our world. We are what we eat, think, and write. By digesting words, we become...

[Frieda P]

A message we all know but you've written it so poignantly. Thing is putting it into effect...very nice.

[Muse]

NICE! You are correct on so many levels. Very wise words to live by..we are "products" made by our own design.

[DIVYA]

You have taken an age old piece of wisdom and put it accross very beautifully and concisely with the help of some right beautiful well-placed words. Hats off to you. I really am the master of my own destiny! Thanx for sharing! 100/100

[lark1311]

Only seeing this now - and what a nice message to remember for the New Year. Good write.

[jdr / Jennifer]

excellent poem with a powerful message

"As you think
So it becomes
I think
Therefore I am"

[LA Lorena]

I like the message here, short, plain and simple. Make the world what you want it to be with your visions and your actions. Well said Eagle, I like this!

[Anna Darksparkle]

powerful with words.. short and so touching.

[EYES OF MY SOUL]

Simple and to the point, nice