IN YOUR MIND

IN YOUR MIND

 

Create the world

In your mind

You are maker of

Your destiny

 

As you think

So it becomes

I think

Therefore I am

 

Plan

Work your plan

Admire

Become

 

Plant

Harvest

Sow

Reap

 

Your world

 

---- Eagle Cruagh

Reviews

[Mary E. Green]

I agree with the rest! Good job.

[Mary]

I like the transition between the lines "I think therefore I am" and "Plan... all the way to Reap... your world." Excellent write- inspiring- when I read it aloud it sounds amazing- like powerful waves crashing on the rocks. I think I'm going to print this one and tape it to my wall right over my computer and read it aloud from time to time.

[Kaela]

Love it! It has great follow-through and is easy to follow.

[Mercedes Sanchez]

a great poem and a message for all to take in life. i must admit, i feel as though something might have been missing to make it just a little bit greater. i quite put my finger on it though

[Brittany]

Great message, inspiring.

[Deandra Dawn]

I agree with the others....inspiring

[Passion]

The title fits perfect, as your words speak inperationally. We are powerful enough to choose our own destiny but we must believe in ourselves to make it happen. Without the confidence, we just become another plant at the bottom of a sea of sorrow.

[None]

Inspirational,

[*** Hey Jude***]

The gentle power these words carry are inspiring. Just as You Are!
You speak truths that we all need to be reminded of! We are the makers of our world as we plant we harvest, and what we sow we shall reap. Thank you for sharing this "gem", as well as yourself! ~ :-D!

[ChaoticSoul]

I love the picture of the owl at the top! And this piece has a nice simple flow that allows for the power of creativity to show between its lines. I feel it is something everyone on here can relate to and that's great.