Heat of this love ~girl~

Heat of this love ~girl~

A Poem by Hibiki

You don't understand me..

There's nowhere
For it to go anymore
(The heat
Of our love)

The grey clouds
The sunlight 
Casts a shadow
The twilight changes colour

This world blurs
Even so
Will I still
Love you?

What should I do?
How can I?
I know this
I'm stupid

I feel
Ardent love
Is a sin

"I want you understand
My feeling
I'll show you
My true feeling"

My voice gone
However much I scream
I'm not in 
Your field of hearing

The sky cleared
Before I know it
It's doesn't
Cheer me

I can't hold 
My feeling back
How can I..
What should I do..?

I'm not going to cry
"I love you!"

The heat of the love
Lit the war
I didn't
Choose this way

I'll show you
My everything
And steal
Your gaze

Prepare for the next attack
Love is blindness
I'm fighting a losing battle
Your kiss open my eyes

© 2014 Hibiki

Author's Note

This is the same story
I make the other version ^^"

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A write of thought and feels like a film before my eyes.

Posted 5 Years Ago

Your writing is very passionate. Filled with lots of love. I really enjoyed reading it.

Posted 8 Years Ago

A very thorough emotion! I love this poem! Keep up the good work.!

Posted 8 Years Ago

Wow, this poem is simply amazing. Very emotional, and very in depth in the description. Great write, my friend.


Posted 8 Years Ago

Difference our love ...
Loved every part of it ... hope to read more of your work

Posted 8 Years Ago

that was really good, it tells a story insides itself!!! keep it up :)

Posted 8 Years Ago

very interesting it made me want to read ore as I went through the poem :)

Posted 8 Years Ago

It is an interesting poem, and I like how you have the lover trying to show how they feel to the other person, while still being unable to do so. It was a wonderful poem.

Posted 8 Years Ago

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Added on June 5, 2014
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