Stripped

Chilled branches shiver;

slowly they reach

for their leaves.

Reviews

[Andromeda]

great personification!

[N. James Frazier]

i like your philophy man, its very nice, i think and wish more people adopted that ideology. It is very tranquil and infact acts in a calming nature. Best of luck in your future writing...

[Legion]

Interesting visual. I hate winter. Can't wait for spring myself.

[Wombat.]

very tranquil. this piece paints a scene that is ever so familiar to a girl living in wisconsin.

[DeadDuck]

If it wasn't for the note on the bottom I wouldn't have commented, but it's a decent haiku. Sweet image of winter's nature.