You Spiral

check your mirror's

repeat
to fade
kaleidoscope eyes.
your
life a coil -
you rummage in
dreams.

dreams in rummage,
you
coil a life -
your
eyes kaleidoscope,
fade to
repeat

Reviews

[Andromeda]

i like! i tried to write a poem once that was palindrome-style too, but it didnt work nearly as well as this.

[Jeremy Cooney]

A very seldom used form of poetry, I think you handled it quite well.

[Periac]

that my friend was nice.......it actually caught me of guard that it all made so much sense....

[Ashley]

That's amazing. Very few people I know can do that and make it actually sound good. And you did it perfectly! You're very talented!

[Adel Eyes]

that was a wild ride
I liked the technical presentation
Have you a theater backround?