A Poem by Hotaru Miyuki

I climb into the deepest hole,

to hide from the feelings that hurt me.

Those feelings make me depressed,

and make me want to die in vain.


I can't escape these feelings that haunt me,

haunt me from my darkest deeds,

why can't I just forget,

forget for whatever I've done to hurt people?


I'm the demon from hell,

the demon who hurts people's lives,

I don't want to be alone,

alone in the deepest hole of my feelings.

© 2009 Hotaru Miyuki

Author's Note

Hotaru Miyuki
hope u like it! i wrote it during school! XP

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Awww Lauren this is cute! ;p

Posted 6 Years Ago

f**k u lisa..your poem sucks it got me crying coz it was me.its great

Posted 9 Years Ago

Great job, love the emotion, love the feeling, A+

Posted 9 Years Ago

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Love it.

Posted 10 Years Ago

love it lauren i liked the emotion in iot and thought it very dark!!! Love it :)

Posted 10 Years Ago

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Added on May 22, 2009


Hotaru Miyuki
Hotaru Miyuki

Stratford, NJ

Hi. My name's Lauren but I like the name Hotaru. Hotaru means Firefly in japanese if you want to know. I love anime and manga. Here's a list of some I like... Naruto Bleach Inuyasha Fruits Baske.. more..

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