Draft Day

The Motion

              

On the twenty second of may,

For me is a certain draft day

Drafted to a land of uncertainty

This fact alone just worries me

Shipped out with a lost mind

All of us lined up to be set 'free'

What will ever happen to me

Must I be drafted in the league

Will I end up like others before me

Heartless, miserable and alone

Hopeless, detestable and single

Who knows, I'll find out in time

On the twenty second of may

I will be on the stage waiting,

Waiting to be finally drafted,

Drafted to a land of uncertainty

Author's Note

I graduate high school tomorrow 5/22/14 and these are my thoughts on it...

Reviews

[Wynter Ignatius]

As I stepped from the threshold of childhood to that of a young man so many years ago I too took the time in stride, questioning life like do now. I still hope I will be half the man I want to be but that like many things is a process of time and effort.

Kudos man and keep it up.

[Jack Kennedy]

I certainly will and thank you for stopping by!

[Wynter Ignatius]

Yeah, I'm playing catch-up with my requests - three digits is a bit much to be in the red.

[Jack Kennedy]

Wow three digits? That's gonna be a heavy duty I must say but good luck with it, I'm sure it'll be fine

[Wynter Ignatius]

Just feel behind due to various things and want to catch up a bit. I don't request myself often as I would rather people discover my stuff on their own time but I'm the type that will always take a look when requested; can't go against my nature after all.

[DreamOn2014]

wow, it is a scary thought. I can tell where the emotion is in this piece. "Dream Big!" - Walt Disney

[♔ CrownedDevil &#..]

I can only imagine it would very scary going into the real world. After finishing school, I myself am still in school. So I have no idea what it would be like. This is a great write, nicely penned.

Kaze~ :-)