The never been told desires

Being thrown into the world once,

Being given only one opportunity.

Being thrown into a certain moment once,

Being given only one choice.

Must choose fast they say,

Althought it's a reckless choice.

Must toe the line they say,

Althought it's a senseless choice.

They block the creativity,

They block the air.

They suppres the essence,

They supress peer reviews.

I'm trying and trying,

Becoming confused more and more,

Not concentrated for a single second.

I'm imprisoned and diggning in,

I'm trying and trying,

to satisfy the lonely world.

At least, I succeded on that..

Reviews

[Usman Muhammad]

Well written poem.
I really liked the theme of your poem which is thought provoking and alarming too.
I also liked your ending, like it was perfect for the topic you selected.
We all are trying to fit in this world, everyone tries different methods to satisfy the lust of this world but the goal is same; to satisfy the lonely world.
I will be looking forward to read your other writings too, so hang in there and please keep writing.
Regards
Usman